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What it's like to not know by ~faded-scars:iconfaded-scars:



The world wass wet and shiny
glossy appeals left to no imagination
when lucid dreamers are awake yet asleep, asleep, asleep
You can feel the storm, feel the vibrations in the air
dark greyed, once pured clouds
guided by a hand not yet married to you
The lioness with stretch from her dark, sad sleep
feeling
alive, alive, alive
the sound of a child's scream
trivial but so long lasting
The flavours of foreign countries unstrange
to your parted lips
gasping for attention, gasping for matrydom
we will burn her on the cross and call her Joan
the ghastly, ghastly fugure draped in light blue satin
how can you ruin her death day?
It should be celebrated with the same flavour of life,
deliver, deliver, deliver
the desperation
&
notification
pressed to the grounds
wet, glossed, shiny
& perfect
©2005-2009 ~faded-scars
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So I had this poem posted before and deleted it... Stupid indeed for I enjoy having it in my gallery so here it is, again. Critique me on this one and I'll eat you alive.

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:iconelvenvampire:
Wow....This is wonderful. "glossy appeals left to no imagination
when lucid dreamers are awake"

That is something straight out of Shakespearian times! It's goregous. You did a fantastci job with this.

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La tristesse durera toujours.

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Of course you do =p

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-There never was a good war or a bad peace- :aww:
:iconfaded-scars:
Thanks you so much ;) a lot of hard work was put into this one so comments such as yours are very much appreciated.

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-There never was a good war or a bad peace- :aww:
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