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Pain stricken, scurvy you
Unmerciful me
Whatever shall thou do?
Execute
Platonic drama
My docile doll, your simplicity holds the key to my sanity
I am a thief; your eternal pain is my entirety

Barbarous ways

Slam the chamber door, clinch the locks, and swallow the only key
Your only chance to ever become free
Submissively crawl through the dark dessert on swollen hands and aching knees
Continuously kiss my feet,
Tell me of the love that is in your shattered heart
I laugh as you bleed your beautiful blue blood.
Feed off of your dead emotions
Drink from the vast oceans of your tears.
Through spotted window panes you see the perfect picture
You plus me

There are no second chances

I'll serve your head on a silver platter to the wild animals I keep hidden in the little brown barn
I'll drink your blood daily until I achieve the youthful smile I once put upon your pretty plastic face.

Don't you wish you never met her?

Stung by love

Join the masquerade
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Author's Comments

I freakin hate having to title and categorize this shit. Enjoy, comments and favs are as usual appreciated :)

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~Kaltros Jan 9, 2005, 1:01:19 AM
wow... that's... pretty angry, i'd say...

i haven't had too much of that sort of thing happening to me but i think i understand.

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Ruling a country is like cooking a small fish.
--Lao Tzu
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~faded-scars Jan 9, 2005, 1:05:15 AM
Ha ha, give me some of the crack you've been smoking lately! j/k you're right I'm so good, Thank you ever so much for the comment.

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-There never was a good war or a bad peace- :aww:
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~faded-scars Jan 9, 2005, 1:47:05 AM
Angry eh? :hmm: I guess there's a hint of anger in it. Thanks for the comment though and it may be a good thing that you haven't gone through this, you're most likely less hated by others than I am, lol. Again, thanks!

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-There never was a good war or a bad peace- :aww:
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~bled-for-you Jan 10, 2005, 12:50:25 PM
Slam the chamber door, clinch the locks, and swallow the only key
Your only chance to ever become free
Submissively crawl through the dark dessert on swollen hands and aching knees
Continuously kiss my feet,
Tell me of the love that is in your shattered heart
I laugh as you bleed your beautiful blue blood.
Feed off of your dead emotions
Drink from the vast oceans of your tears.
Through spotted window paned you see the perfect picture
You plus me

I think that is the strongest part of the poem..it's really well done

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Wish you were here...
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~faded-scars Jan 11, 2005, 12:24:14 AM
I do try....You actually helped me notice a typo in the poem... Oh and you my dear should post more, like I'm one to talk, lol but I enjoy your poetry. Thank you for the comment.

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-There never was a good war or a bad peace- :aww:
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~Vybris Jan 11, 2005, 4:02:14 AM
your poetry ceases to amaze me, I WANT MORE, im addicted to your writing now, i dont wanna sound wierd with that though, its just been too long since ive seen poetry with such unique passion and meaning of its own, you need to look at my girlfriends work, it does the same thing to me, she's deviant artist Dephiledpixee, she would be much appreciative of your comments, and would also enjoy your work as i have. anyways PLEASE OH PLEASE post more soon, you say you have hundreds in another one, well i want at least a few more for the sake of the fact that u got me sucked in to begin with, i think u owe it to your fans =D well im off to check out your more of your writing.
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~bled-for-you Jan 11, 2005, 9:53:41 AM
haha..yes..post is something I do need to do. God..I haven't for so long:-\ Maybe I'll get around to getting something 'done' and put up here. I'm just so picky about what I think is good and what isn't good enough to put up here

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Wish you were here...
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